My Favorite Activity

Chris Shaw

    According to my personality{1}, I prefer motionless activity to an exciting one. Going to a movie has been my favorite activity since I first went to the pictureWChoice {2} theater. As a ruleGood!, I go to a movie every week to relax myselfGood! from a series of study and examinations. Telling the truth{3}, movies seem like some kind of magic which guide me into {***}Art {4}different world, making me feel many various encounters of life{5}. From those movies{***}MissingW {6}, I can learn some concept about the whole world and some new idea which never occurred to me before{***}Yes!. To sum up, going to a movie is not only my favorite activity but also one of my best waySing/Plu {7} to know what life is.

All rights are reserved by Cynthia Yu.{8}2003.Oct.



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